जग कागज़ में उलझ पिघल
मैं स्याही बन अर्थ बन
जग बदले बादल, माथे पर बल
मैं गरज बारिश बन ठन
चारों ओर धुंध की चदरें
मिटाता चलूँ, सुलझाता चलूँ
चमन जैसे कीचड़ में कमल
तुम संग हो या मैं एकल
सोच, ठिठक कर गया सम्भल
राही हूँ या अंजान राह आजकल
झलक देख उलझे नेत्र सजल
सफर रोज़ का पर जाना किधर
मंज़िल किस ओर, नहीं खबर
बसूं कल-कल के पल-पल में
न थका चल-चल जल-जल में
लिख सवाल स्मृतिपटल मुसलसल
दल दलदल में शीतल तल धरातल
जग-जग जग निखरे नज़रें बदल
बजे कंगन-पैजन लिपटी कफ़न
कर प्रबल सकल जतन जला मशाल
बचाऊँ अंतिम लौ, ज़ोर दिखाए तूफान
अक्लमंद हो या मन्द अकल
जाल जान सालों से न फिसल
करूं दखल सरल, घुटन विफल
पहचानूँ कौन नकल कौन असल ॥
बहुत ही अच्छा लिखा है आपने
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बहुत शुक्रिया आपका 😄
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khubsurat rachna…….behtarin.👌👌
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जी बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया आपका 😄
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Fabulous post
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Thank you so much 😃
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Please read my first post
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Yeah sure
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वाह
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शुक्रिया आपका 😃
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Bahut hee sundar rachna aapki!
Vishesh ye laine bahut pasand aayi:
तुम संग हो या मैं एकल
सोच, ठिठक कर गया सम्भल
राही हूँ या अंजान राह आजकल
झलक देख उलझे नेत्र सजल
Samajh aa raha hai ki aapka shabd gyaan vishall ewam teekshn hai!
Sadhuwaad!
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बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया रविन्द्र सर comments के जरिये इतना प्यार देने और मेरा हौसला बढ़ाने के लिए,
बहुत अच्छा लगा इतने सारे आपके Comments पढ़ कर
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Beautiful
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शुक्रिया आपका दिव्या जी 🤗
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Wow.. beautiful post indeed!
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शुक्रिया पांड्या जी 🤗
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Very nice
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Thank you Jyoti ji 😄
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बहुत खूब!
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शुक्रिया स्नेहा जी 🤗
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Great….
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Thanks Nabeela ji 🤗
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nice one ☺
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Thanks 🤗
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आपके जवाब पर मेरे द्वारा अपने आप like हो जा रहे हैं। 😂 क्या आपने भी कभी ऐसा नोटिस किया?
मैं अभी-अभी wordpress खोला हूँ पढ़ने के लिए लेकिन like पहले से हुआ है।
मैं काफी दिनों से सोच रहा था पूछने के लिए।
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नहीं, मैंने कभी ध्यान नहीं दिया इस पर 😅
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और यह आपके हरेक पोस्ट के साथ हो रहा है। 😂
चलिए अच्छा है। मेहनत कम करना पड़ेगा।
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😂😂😂 सही कहा आपने
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ऐसी रसमयी अभिव्यक्ति
बहुत सुंदर
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बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया आपका शुभा जी 🤗
आपकी रचनाओं के आगे ये कुछ भी नहीं
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ऐसा तो बिल्कुल नहीं
मुझे वास्तव में आपकी कविताओं का level अलग लगता है
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सच में
ये तो आपका बड़प्पन है ☺️
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आपकी लेखन कला उम्दा है
मैं कहीं नहीं ठहरता
बहुत कुछ सीखना है मुझे अभी
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और ये आपका बड़प्पन !!
ये अन्दाज़ भी अच्छा है 😊
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Hehehe शुक्रिया शुभा जी 😅
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Fabulous creation
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Thank you so much Dulcy ji 🤗😄😀
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Welcome sir 😊
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😁😁☺️
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I am too small for ji
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Really, apki age kya hai ?
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13
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Wow, itni kam age me writing ki hobby generally dekhne ko nhi milti
Mai to fir bhi apko Dulcy ji kahunga 😅😃
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Thanks a lot sir 😊. I learning and getting motivated by reading others wonderful writer’s creations like you.
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You are too source of motivation for us dear 🤗
You are nice girl ☺️
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My pleasure sir 😊
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Btw you can call me Navneet not sir 😅
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Ok 😊
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😃☺️😁🤗
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अति सुंदर
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बहुत शुक्रिया अनु जी 🤗😁☺️😃
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खूबसूरत 👌
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बहुत शुक्रिया आपका 😁🤗☺️😃
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Beautiful, rhyming se lekar arth tak sab kuch kamaal ka hai.
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😅😅
Thank you so much Priya ji 🤗😃☺️
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My pleasure Navneet ji. 😊
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😃☺️🤗😁
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Vahh Navneet ji bahut achha likha hai me bhi kuchh words to likh hi leti hu to agar aap apna kimati samay nikal ke hame padhenge to mujhe bahut achha lagega.
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बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया आपका 😁🤗☺️😃
हां बिल्कुल क्यों नहीं
जरूर पढूंगा
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बेहतरीन रचना 👏👏👌
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बहुत शुक्रिया आपका अनिता जी 😁😃🤗
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खुशी हुई कि आपको पसंद आई ये कविता 😁
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बहुत ख़ूब👌
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बहुत धन्यवाद आपका ज़ोया जी 🍫😁😃
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Well written. We are lucky if we can understand what is real and what is not, what is good and what is not good. Regards
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Right
Thank you so much 😁
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Fabulous 👍
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Thanks a lot dear 🍺🤗🍧🍨😄
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👍👍
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Beautifully written 😊🌼
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Thank you so much dear 🤗💕
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You are welcome 😊🍧🍭🍬🍫🧁🥧😀
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सहज सरल सुव्यवस्थित और सुदृष्ट रचना ।
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बहुत शुक्रिया आपका 😃
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बहुत ख़ूब👌
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शुक्रिया आपका 🤗
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गजब शानदार
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शुक्रिया आपका 🤗
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Badhiya👏
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Thank you so much Veena 🤗
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I’m speechless
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Thank you so much 🤗🥰
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Best 👍
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Thank you so much 🤗🍫💐❤️
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Nice👌🏼
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Thank you Deeksha ji 🤗💐
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Very beautiful lines. A fabulous composition. Keep writing.
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Thank you so much Aparna ji 😁💐
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NICE!
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Thank you 🤗💐
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जबरजस्त पोस्ट
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बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया आपका अनुपमा जी 🤗
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